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Post by Blonca on Sat 6 Oct - 12:45



- My Information -
Name: Blonca Scarlet
Nickname: Blonca
Gender: Female
Age: 18.
Birthday: july, 28th
Sexuality: Straight
Others: N/A

Personality:
Blonca is a nice girl that can sometimes be two face when your see her you think one thing but when it comes down she is cold in her heart with her lust skills and motives behind everything she does. She can sometimes be Strong but in her body she knows she is weak but can put on a front like she can do what every she wants but will open up to her friends around her.
She is strong in her magic but likes to fight in hand to hand combat to test here skills and see how good her enemies are before she will use magic she is a glutton for fighting and getting into trouble.
She also has to deals with the 3 sins greed, pride and lust that flow’s in her head and controls her movements greed she wants to fight and kill her enemies, Pride she wants everyone to like her not to fear her and look up to her and, lust Her body she wants to be took in control of but then she knows she has the upper hand and will be able to kill them

Likes:
Hand to hand combat- feels like it makes her stronger in many ways like mind and body
Thunder Storms- She feels that her magic is stronger in storms
Drinking-She likes the feeling it gives her after she had one too many to forget the bad day she had
Modeling-Thinks its a goodway to get people to like her and get fames
Singing-Likes to write songs for her guild memebrs to see her play

Dislikes:
Perverts-The try to touch her and she feels like what is going on in her mind
Ice wizards- she thinks they are evil and can freeze her in
Snow storms- she hates it when it’s cold outside and there is nothing to do
Mean people-Thinks you dont have to mean evin if your in a dark guild
Working-Thinks working take time from doing things she likes to do

Motivations:
Blonca Old friend that she meet when she was little and finding him so they can be together once more.also to help her friend escape from prison by buying his way so they can be together Normally, openly admitted in front of the others that She would become the number 1 in the world and that every wizard will know her name so after she dies she can live on in people hearts as the number 1 dragon slayer .Her guild make her want to protect them and become the new guild leader and make the guild better and stronger so then they can get more people to join there guild and have people not think there such a bad guild

Fears:
Losing the one she loves to monster or any thing or any person.She fears death and not liveing into she find's her meaning in the world and why she was sky draong slayer and litting people down when they count on her to protect them.fears spiders because there gross and scary to her thinks they have 2 many eyes and legs.Getting to drunk than going home and doing something she was not supost and end up in jail and haveing to get her dad to get her out of jail and haveing to deal with his rath.Being told she is not he best person she could be

- My Appearance -

Height: 5'7"
Weight: 88.lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Purple Color
General Appearance: Blonca wears a very short purple Chinese dress which shows her cleavage and belly button, and is the most mature.She always ties her hair up after waking up and is often seen with, sake, an alcohol bottle from drinking before she going to bed.Blonce has long black hair with purple eyes she has small purple shoes that she can dance in and move freely she also not that tall she is a 5'7" she is skinny with a cup size of a D cup had a model body.

- My History -

History: N/A

- My Guild -

Guild: Oracion Seis
Tattoo: Purple on Shoulder.
Rank: A

- My Face Claim -

Kazehana from Sekirei


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Re: Blonca Scarlet

Post by Rex Skywalker on Sat 6 Oct - 13:38

Okay I've fixed the Coding Errors. I've also corrected some grammar and spelling mistakes.

Here are some stuffs you still need to fix

1) I'm not sure if you're allowed to post a picture that big

2) Fears requires 100 words and right now you only have 61 words

3) For Weight we want the units in pounds not KG so 40kg =88.1849lbs

4) For Face Claim, write down where the character came from which anime.

5) I thought you wanted to be B rank, I'm not sure about A rank so you'll have to ask Tsumiki Miniwa again.

Fix those and Tsumiki or I will check it again! good luck ^^

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Re: Blonca Scarlet

Post by Blonca on Sat 6 Oct - 14:15

BUMp

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Re: Blonca Scarlet

Post by Tsumiki Miniwa on Sat 6 Oct - 20:07

Sorry Blonca, I just edited the character templates, and I also edited yours a bit. I want you to see if there is any grammar mistake because I saw some. Go and edit the 'others' and the general appearance first, and if you don't find the grammar mistakes, use grammar checker online. I removed the 'my magic' from the template, so you also need to remove it, but, I allow you to create a magic registration first and copy paste the magic to the magic registration.

After full stop, you can put a space to make your character more neat.

Your motivation only have 78 words.

And... your avatar is very large, so U changed it.

There is no other problem, and if you fix the things I said above, you will be approved.
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Post by Blonca on Sun 7 Oct - 12:59

Bump

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Post by Tsumiki Miniwa on Sun 7 Oct - 13:08

General Appearance should be 100 words, and put your weight no decimal places, just put it as 88lbs, height change to 5'7"

Fix all of these, and ready to be approved.
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Post by Blonca on Sun 7 Oct - 13:23

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Re: Blonca Scarlet

Post by Rex Skywalker on Sun 7 Oct - 13:35

Hmmm looks good to me, everything is planned out nicely.

APPROVED!

Good Luck with your Adventures now ^^

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Re: Blonca Scarlet

Post by Tsumiki Miniwa on Tue 9 Oct - 2:39

I edited Blonca as she wants to change her guild to Oracion Seis.
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